tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8225071186332029230.post8874406608767570046..comments2024-01-09T13:42:59.306+05:30Comments on "ABHINNKALPNA": आजाअभिन्नhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06944616806062137325noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8225071186332029230.post-24713567630671099662008-10-02T22:07:00.000+05:302008-10-02T22:07:00.000+05:30Jiyen andherebhee jee bharke.........................Jiyen andherebhee jee bharke...<BR/>......................."<BR/>aur<BR/>"Chhod de duniyadaaree...."<BR/>Ye panktiyan to kamalkee hain!<BR/><BR/>"Hamne chhod dee saaree<BR/>Duniya,aur duniyadaree,<BR/>Kisee ek ke liye,<BR/>Jinke liye chhodee,<BR/>Wo bade duniyadaar nikle,<BR/>Palatke hansee udayee,<BR/>Kaha,wo sakte nahee <BR/>Chhod duniya unkee,<BR/>Ek pagleeke liye..."<BR/>Shamashamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10349457755551725245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8225071186332029230.post-5152645239491435102008-09-29T13:49:00.000+05:302008-09-29T13:49:00.000+05:30बहुत सुंदर...लाजवाब.बहुत सुंदर...लाजवाब.रंजनाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01215091193936901460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8225071186332029230.post-46117480133981702422008-09-16T22:06:00.000+05:302008-09-16T22:06:00.000+05:30Aap ka comment padha meri HindiYugm ki gazal per a...Aap ka comment padha meri HindiYugm ki gazal per aur aapka blog dekha. Aap bahut achcha likhte hain. Waqai achcha.<BR/><BR/>Aapki jaankari ke liye -- too many images on the blog can make the page-load slow, specially for those who hv slow internet conenction. Aapki Gazalein itni achchi hain ... tasveeron ki zaroorat nahin !Straight Bendhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03135986626734443231noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8225071186332029230.post-47353729401541508532008-09-15T10:44:00.000+05:302008-09-15T10:44:00.000+05:30खड़ी जो दरमियाँ तेरे मेरेदीवार हवा की गिराने आजा" b...खड़ी जो दरमियाँ तेरे मेरे<BR/>दीवार हवा की गिराने आजा<BR/><BR/>" beautiful composition, with toucing thoghts and feelings"<BR/><BR/>Regardsseema guptahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02590396195009950310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8225071186332029230.post-16425709816132976212008-09-14T16:28:00.000+05:302008-09-14T16:28:00.000+05:30andaaz se ek mahine ke baad apane kuch likha aur p...andaaz se ek mahine ke baad apane kuch likha aur post kiya...<BR/><BR/>aane wale ke intezaar mai likhi hui ye rachana ke liye dhanywaad...* મારી રચના *https://www.blogger.com/profile/17704288147367514865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8225071186332029230.post-42686643183272931072008-09-13T12:28:00.000+05:302008-09-13T12:28:00.000+05:30धन्यवाद अर्श जी वर्तनी की गलती बताने के लिए ,आपने...धन्यवाद अर्श जी वर्तनी की गलती बताने के लिए ,आपने रचना के भाव को समझा और सराहा है,आपके अमूल्य सुझावों का सदैव स्वागत रहेगा <BR/>पुन: धन्यवादअभिन्नhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06944616806062137325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8225071186332029230.post-56609129774871551822008-09-13T12:17:00.000+05:302008-09-13T12:17:00.000+05:30bahot hi sundar rachana hai bahot hi sulhjhi aur s...bahot hi sundar rachana hai bahot hi sulhjhi aur saral rachana hai mere hisab se aapne jo niche likha hai usko thora thik kar le samne k jagah pe samane honi chahiye.<BR/>तेरे बिन क्या वजूद मेरा ?<BR/>आजा मुझ में सामने आजा<BR/>niche wali line bahot hi bhavpurna hai .<BR/>खड़ी दरमियाँ तेरे मेरे<BR/>दीवार हवा की गिराने आजा<BR/><BR/>sundar rachana ke liye badhai....<BR/><BR/><BR/>regards<BR/>Arsh"अर्श"https://www.blogger.com/profile/15590107613659588862noreply@blogger.com