Hi, Love Your this particular one, following is the outcome when I was loving raeding it, caressing it..
Kuchh kehti si ye raat he, Kuch jagi si ye raat he, Ek ye raat hi to he zindgi, Baki zindgi ki phir kyon baat he? Yahi he wo ek raat hosh ki, Jawaniyon ke iss nazuk daur me, Yahi to wo ek dil-nashin raath he, Na tarikh mukarrar he uss saza ki, Jiski doshi ye jo raat he
aadrniya shubhchintak chkor ji sarvpratham aapko aur aapke humsafar ko humari taraf se dil ki gahraiyon se mubarkbaad,wish u every happiness in the world.and a lot of occassions of success and happinesses.jaankar khushi mili ki humari bhabhi jaan bhi Adab ki dunia ka ek hissa hai.aap ko humari ye tutti futti kavita pasand aayi,isme mujh se jayad aap badhai ke patra ho,aap me vo kshamta hai jo shabdo se pare jakar bhi man ke bhavon ko pad leti hai.... us par aap ki sundar sazi sanvri poem paakar mai dhanya mahsoos kar raha hoon...bhai hum to aap k fan ho gaye hai keep it up
dear Archiev aap ke liye mai itna hi kahunga ki aap ne raat ke jis positive roop ka bakhan kiya hai..thats mahraba...aapki poetry me gajab ki samvedna hai...ek perfection hai..aapke protsahan ki mai tareef karta hoon..aap ko padne ka mauka mila..ummed hai aur bhi aisee rachnaon se hume vashibhut karte rahoge dhanyavaad
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Hi,
Love Your this particular one, following is the outcome when I was loving raeding it, caressing it..
Kuchh kehti si ye raat he,
Kuch jagi si ye raat he,
Ek ye raat hi to he zindgi,
Baki zindgi ki phir kyon baat he?
Yahi he wo ek raat hosh ki,
Jawaniyon ke iss nazuk daur me,
Yahi to wo ek dil-nashin raath he,
Na tarikh mukarrar he uss saza ki,
Jiski doshi ye jo raat he
"ARCHIEV"
aadrniya shubhchintak chkor ji
sarvpratham aapko aur aapke humsafar ko humari taraf se dil ki gahraiyon se mubarkbaad,wish u every happiness in the world.and a lot of occassions of success and happinesses.jaankar khushi mili ki humari bhabhi jaan bhi Adab ki dunia ka ek hissa hai.aap ko humari ye tutti futti kavita pasand aayi,isme mujh se jayad aap badhai ke patra ho,aap me vo kshamta hai jo shabdo se pare jakar bhi man ke bhavon ko pad leti hai....
us par aap ki sundar sazi sanvri poem paakar mai dhanya mahsoos kar raha hoon...bhai hum to aap k fan ho gaye hai keep it up
Seema ji aap ki do lines ne mere poem ko jo crown diya hai me feels proud of it....words are unsufficient to praise this effort of u
sure
dear Archiev
aap ke liye mai itna hi kahunga
ki aap ne raat ke jis positive roop ka bakhan kiya hai..thats mahraba...aapki poetry me gajab ki samvedna hai...ek perfection hai..aapke protsahan ki mai tareef karta hoon..aap ko padne ka mauka mila..ummed hai aur bhi aisee rachnaon se hume vashibhut karte rahoge
dhanyavaad
एक टिप्पणी भेजें